At the moment I felt no pain at all and just had a bit of a headache. So I decided to call quits and just walk around the playground trying to regain my train of thought and control. However when walking around I began to notice many of the kids look at me with a shocked look on their faces. I was still baffled and painless of what had just happened until another kid told me I was bleeding. Last thing I remember is me crying to a teacher and ending up in the nurses office getting stitches as my mother comes in. The only good thing that came out of this experience is getting out of school early and getting a lollipop.
Monday, October 25, 2010
Blog #3 Time When I Was Confused
It was in third grade when I became at one time my most confused. It was recess time and the weather outside was rainy. We were able to outside after lunch and play on the playground. So as we're going outside me and a couple of kids decided start a game of tag. As the game progressed we had created rules on the go, such us the inability to touch the ground. However it was a fairly large playground, full of many slides, monkey bars, and especially a wobbly bridge. This "wobbly bridge" is what will cause my confusion. The way this happens is that as we were being chased by the tagger, crossing the wobbly bridge, and a combination of rain making the floor wet causes me to slip and fall hitting my head on end of the bridge directly on the metal floor.
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Great story. I would suggest looking over your writing a couple times because you either missed some words or you spelled them wrong. I liked how you used uncommon words, but they still made sense in your story. At the beginning your story was a little confusing but changing around some sentences would really help. Overall great story with a funny ending.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great story. In the begining I was alittle lost, but put the pieces together so everything made sense. Your word choice was very interesting, not in a bad way but a good way. In the end great story.
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